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Dawn at St. Mary's |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dawn at St. Mary's By: Noah Eaton 6/1/02 I'm breathing synecdoches Married to my ear Skipping across amethyst skies in a pongee breeze There's a chapel in the sky Where angels light their candles Where cherubs spread the pomace of life I see it all, imbued in pompeian red Polyphemus moths and bluebirds singing with them all Rehearsing a catharsis in summary Making an unlikely hero of every Scaramouch Making comedies of every tragedy Shaking a tree for every prayer High above I can quench my thirst of the drought High above I am only an angels arm-length from the stars Here I can play Solitaire With the butterflies, being a good loser Watching them flutter happily to each winning hand Streaking rainbow light through the morning view Two-step in prism tango Weaving a tiara for Mother Nature's head I dig a ditch To bury Gethsemane Planting henna over all of God's country Every time I watch the sun rise Upon this high glacier I can always hear Mother Nature cry happily in verse... I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2003 02:03 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, Noah, Noah......you amaze me with your thoughts and words. Big hugs! Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Spectacular poem and picture. Is this St. Mary's Lake in Glacier National Park, by any chance? What a wonderful write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
A marvelous write. your command of the language is impressive. thanks for sharing. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Good Grief this is good! Noah, I wish I had "words with way" like you do... See, I can't even say that right... This is just so spectacular! Whether this is a repost or you just posted it for us, I am sure glad I got to read it! You have talent so many, (myself mainly!) of us can only aspire to! As always, thanks for sharing your work with us. Richy |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Spellbinding write,Noah.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Hi Noah...isn't it amazing how God's wonders never cease to inspire. His creatures, and creations amuse, inspire, comfort, elate, strike us with awe, and sing a song to us!! Lovely as they always are. Such a delight and a treat it always is to read you. Thanks for sharing this one. God Bless, SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Noah Beautiful and FANTABULOUS imagery! Loved it, Connie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just stunning! |
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