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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2003-09-20 03:36 AM




Hummingbirds Fanciful Flight
By: Noah Eaton
2/20/01

Gracefully
The little hummingbirds fly
Sucking the wild honey from the beehive
Drinking the marrow from the soft lips of magnolias calyx
Nieces and nephews of the sprites, chanting lyrics of all nature
Prophets of wild heaven, messangers of earthly love

Darting
To and fro, down from the timberline and through the hummocks
Flocking in swarms together, kaleidoscope lassos gyrating in packs
Swimming through the azure skies, darning canopies quilt
Small filigree kites brushing against the misty parachute of these green rooftops
Threaded cobweb wings speckled in the splendor of the entwined floodlight

Swiftly
These givers of nature flutter
Giving eternity’s sap to the myriads of thirsty peduncles
Bleeping out green acres composition to all living creatures
All awakening from the long winter sleeps, roaming the shoulders of the wilderness
Stampedes, murders, schools, parties invited at Mothers Reunion, hollering in unity

Unfettered
Free of incarceration, free of corruption
Trailing behind the ebbs of incarceration, scouting out the dusk that follows
Cycling trains of time pass on by again and again, only they remind that fact
Speaking times words as Dusk closes suns louvers over, welcoming night
Bowing to the lively flock, hiding under the canopy

Peacefully
The hummingbirds retire in the cypress green
Rocked gently in the cradling branches, in the warm knotholes of the trees
Sipping away at the sweet residue left behind inside
The robles and the sycamores carry them in shagbark laps
As the evening winds seep through the peep holes, breathing winds of wisdom

Gracefully
The little hummingbirds fly
Flying together, givers of all that’s pure
These wondrous creatures welcomed to our eyes
Drinking from the buttercups of creation
Making hummingbirds fanciful flight a beautiful sight to behold…


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2003 03:36 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-20 08:56 AM


WOW!!!  I never realized that the darling little hummingbirds that flit into and out of my backyard were so traveled. this is a mighty piece. Bravo!!

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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2 posted 2003-09-20 09:41 AM


Noah, your writing just keeps getting better and better. I love the little hummingbirds which visit my garden for nectar. Lovely piece. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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3 posted 2003-09-20 10:21 AM


Ah Noah ... I just loved this. I have a special connection with these wonderful creatures. We had scores of them at our old country property. They would return each year to us, and gave us endless hours of fascination watching their amazing acrobatics. They are beautiful in every way, and you've done them justice with this beautifully descriptive tribute. Just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2003-09-20 11:43 AM


WOW, Noah...this is beautiful. These little winged creatures God created touched my life when I most needed it. It's a long story, but it came along at the right time. I collect them now. Wonderful little bits of Heaven!

Shara--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-20-2003 11:44 AM).]

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5 posted 2003-09-20 12:09 PM


Wonderful Noah.  I had never given a thought to the humming birds lives except as they connected with mine.  How much I have missed.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2003-09-20 12:53 PM


Noah,  I adore these tiny winged creatures and have them at my trumpet vine and honeysuckle plant. They are so quick and so small, that I have to really concentrate to see them! and try as I might, I cannot get a picture.

A wonderfully written piece.

Hugs, Marti

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7 posted 2003-09-20 05:36 PM


Noah:  This is a wonderful write! We have clouds of humminbbirds in the summer, here and enjoy them so much.  We have five different specie and they are all beautiful.
They nest in the bushes in our back yard and when you walk past you can hear them chatter.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2003-09-20 07:14 PM


Noah, the hummingbird has to be my favourite...
so tiny, and delicate in nature..so beautiful in colour.
I visit a special place where I have actually had one land on  my hand!
It wasn't even afraid of me...amazing..
and also amazing is the distance they travel to migrate to warmer climes in the winter.
Beautifully written my sidekick!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~



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9 posted 2003-09-21 03:34 PM




Wow Noah, this amazing tribute hummed along as gracefully as the magnificent little wonders it was written about!

I can’t imagine a tribute for hummingbirds, being any better!
What a privilege it is to read something as spectacular as this.

You are very special Noah!

To all of us!

Richy



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