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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-09-20 12:30 PM


God's Masterpiece

Night is heavy, deep in silence.
As a woman continues to breathe,
A new life is born-
A baby's cries keep us awake-
Born to glorify our Lord,
Mother to all nature.

Night is heavy, deep in peace.
As a woman continues to breathe,
A new moon is born-
A nurture heart is alive-
Born to glorify our Lord,
Mother to all love, to all nature.

Night is heavy, deep in meaning.
As a woman continues to breathe,
A new mission is born-
A new infant to be loved-
Born to glorify our Lord,
Mother to all love, to all humans.

Night is heavy, deep in thoughts.
As humans continue to breathe,
God continues to bless us-
We are God's master creation-
We're part of nature,
Born to glorify our Lord,
Mother to all love, to all creatures.

Night is heavy, deep in grasping.
At the moment of our birth,
God already know who we are,
Who we're going to be,
Yet God loves us regardless,
That we choose to love him, or not.
He will never give us up.

Night is heavy, I want to sleep.
Yet I'm not afraid, of dark.
Caused God is with me.
I sleep in His hands,
My dreams are in peace...
I love you Lord, oh.
Oh I finally trust you.

I finally trust prayer,
I finally found you...

Lord we are blessed with nature.

(c)Sept 19, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-20 12:47 PM






(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, I too believe that Nature and children are the two most gorgeous creations of God, as they give us innocence, hope, inspiration, and love that we all can learn from and have our hearts warmed from! (smiles) This is a true treasure, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-20-2003 12:48 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-09-20 01:04 PM


I sleep in His hands,
My dreams are in peace...
I love you Lord, oh.
Oh I finally trust you.
I finally trust prayer,
I finally found you...
Lord we are blessed with nature.


Some wonderful lines from a wonderful poem.

Hugs and smiles, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

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3 posted 2003-09-20 05:32 PM


Eliza:  Very well done! You set the stmosphere of the poem so well and I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-09-20 11:12 PM


Beautiful Eliza
hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

Richy
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5 posted 2003-09-21 03:07 PM





The beginning of a new life, under a new moon.
Awaiting the dawn, of a new day...
Wonderfully written Aries!
Nice to meet you!

Richy



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