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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
little girl with big dreams lost and confused it seems not knowin' where she's goin' little girl cries in the night her plaintive voice full of fright don't know what to do without you she's a little lost it's true you're a little lost too don't lie to me just 'cause I can't see the truth is I'm so scared to be alone without you never ending despair racks my bones and leaves me here afraid of being afraid alone and sick of being here little girl all alone listen to her dreadful moan 'cause she knows without a doubt than her dreams will never be realized little girl with big dreams and I can't prevent her screams Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very sad. A little girl left alone should never happen. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (09-17-2003 12:27 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is so sad. Makes me want to cry. :'( Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Maddy vanD Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 99Newfoundland, Canada |
Sad..yes, but very powerful. I can relate to these feelings. An Excellent write Maddy |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
thanx Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. |
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Mor-Estal Landis Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 10Luca, Ventoren |
What do I tell you about all your poetry? It's priceless, fantastic, etheral even at times. It's unreal the amount of talent you have BP. I loved this poem, as I do all your work. |
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