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teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan

0 posted 2003-09-17 09:18 AM


little girl with big dreams
lost and confused it seems
not knowin' where she's goin'
little girl cries in the night
her plaintive voice full of fright
don't know what to do without you
she's a little lost it's true
you're a little lost too
don't lie to me just 'cause I can't see
the truth is I'm so scared
to be alone without you
never ending despair
racks my bones and leaves me here
afraid of being afraid
alone and sick of being here
little girl all alone
listen to her dreadful moan
'cause she knows without a doubt
than her dreams will never be realized
little girl with big dreams
and I can't prevent her screams

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

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Member Rara Avis
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Posts 9912
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1 posted 2003-09-17 12:27 PM


This is very sad. A little girl left alone should never happen.  Joyce  

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (09-17-2003 12:27 PM).]

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-09-17 11:05 PM


This is so sad. Makes me want to cry. :'(
Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Maddy vanD
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since 2003-09-06
Posts 99
Newfoundland, Canada
3 posted 2003-09-17 11:08 PM


Sad..yes, but very powerful. I can relate to these feelings.
An Excellent write

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

teenpoet
Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
Michigan
4 posted 2003-09-18 09:55 AM


thanx

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

Mor-Estal Landis
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 10
Luca, Ventoren
5 posted 2003-09-22 10:41 AM


What do I tell you about all your poetry? It's priceless, fantastic, etheral even at times. It's unreal the amount of talent you have BP. I loved this poem, as I do all your work.
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