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savory New Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 3 |
i adore you for teaching me things that are real and the difference between correct and incorrect taking grey paint and disecting it molecule by molecule to seperate the black from white a perfect form i see your brown eyes fall on me, waiting i sit up straight because you require it i hesitate because you don't expect it and i begin a split-second late enough for you to notice me when i'm done i search you your whole body looking for affirmation praise.. anything a smile later from that beautiful mouth of yours i feel that rush i get each time you're pleased with me [This message has been edited by savory (09-16-2003 01:43 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It is nice that feeling we get when someone approves, and feels proud of us. I know what you mean. Just brings an inner smile that can't stay there. It has to come to the outside to shine on your face!!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
I really enjoyed your poem, very well done. It's amazing what we'll do for our loved ones, to make them happier, to get them to smile, laugh, and etc. Again, very good read savory, thanks. - The Sublime |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I can understand this, slightly. I try to make others happy but I don't look for approval because I know I won't recieve it. It's just easier that way. I guess. Written well. Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last. |
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