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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Wouldn't it be fun Wouldn't it be grand To be able to harness this This power that lies a myth Wouldn't it be fun To move that desk Slam it to the top Upside down it would lie Be able to alter their thoughts For the good, bad, or insane Make them question their own being Unknowningly grant them fear A revelation could be rumored With me at the base Or it could be rumored With me cloaked for none to see Uncomprehensible by even myself I could express to everyone But somehow never let them connect Apocalypse would be their thoughts Many would soon insist But under it all I know that it lies untrue Everyday I think Wouldn't it be cool Wouldn't it be grand To make a revelation And do it myself Until then, these powers lie just a rumor Lost in the space between space and time Where God lies with watching eyes and patient state Untouchable by mortal hands and even God [This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (09-10-2003 05:24 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting write. Not sure that I understand all of it...but...still...makes one ponder life as it is or could be. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Sublime Truth Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 24New Denver, B.C., Canada |
Very intricately put...I like it a lot, will take some reading to get the meaning. But, remembering the first few stanzas, it would be grand to do all those things. Thanks for the very deep read. Truly a very well composed symphony to cause thoughts. - The Sublime |
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