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junemac
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0 posted 2003-09-03 05:09 AM



I crave your words
Like an addict in pain
Tiny injections
Of pleasure again

Needy and greedy for more of you
Dependant on drinking your sweet heady brew
I cant see tomorrow for in limbo i stay
Breathing only for a fix of you in my day

Eternalwanting
Agony,sweet hell
Total surrender
To loves prison hell

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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-09-03 10:54 PM


(((((hugs))))))

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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2 posted 2003-09-04 12:54 PM


June~

'I crave your words'

Now that's one addiction I lay claim to~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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junemac
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3 posted 2003-09-04 03:53 PM


thank you shararose i know i needed that hug
(((hugs ))) back to you :0)

awwwwww marge that is such a lovely thing to say .......

thank you so much. hugs from june x


ps, there are a couple of mistakes in this poem and i am going to repost it here after this one.


junemac
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4 posted 2003-09-04 03:55 PM


redone !!!!!!!


I crave your words
Like an addict in pain
Tiny injections
Of pleasure again

Needy and greedy for more of you
Dependant on drinking your sweet heady brew
I can't see tomorrow for in limbo I stay
Breathing only for a fix of you in my day

Eternal wanting
Agony,sweet hell
Total surrender
To loves prison Cell


BETTER ....... LOL

gringakiwi
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5 posted 2003-09-04 07:34 PM


Junemac:

I can't see tomorrow for in limbo I stay
Breathing only for a fix of you in my day

I know what you mean! you said this so well!

Connie

[This message has been edited by gringakiwi (09-04-2003 07:35 PM).]

junemac
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6 posted 2003-09-05 05:18 PM


awwwww thanks connie and it is sooooooo hard to contain that feeling too.

hugs june xxxxxxx

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