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Phantoms Passing |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Phantoms Passing I went back to the old, home place And wandered there awhile. There were so many cherished spots And things that made me smile. The wood gazebo, there I spied, Half hidden in the trees. I went and sat upon its steps And listened to the breeze. It sang to me of yesterdays And picnics in the sun. Of summer nights and sweet delights. Of young lives, just begun. Where are they now, those children who All shared this spot with me And do they ever travel back, If just in memory? I stayed until the evening threw Long shadows on the grass And all the stars in Heaven came, To watch my phantoms pass! Betty Lou Hebert Published by World of Poetry, 1988 Grandmother Earth News, 1995 National Library of Poetry, 1996 [This message has been edited by Trillium (09-01-2003 08:44 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou I am sure many of us feel this way, I know I do, especially when I visit the home where I grew up. I walk into my dad's shed and I feel his presence and the memories come flooding back. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Geat poem and it is wonderful to be able to go back in memory. Love, Joyce |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Trillian, this is special and so nostalgic. Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely, lovely words. Just beautiful!!! Walking down memory lane. Very nice to read!! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You just flood me with memories-in-recall~ This is WONDERFUL~ Can ya' tell I LOVE IT ? I do I do I do~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Betty Lou! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: I'm glad you could relate to the poem and hope it brought back happy memories for you. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: What would life be without our memories? Thanks for commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maggie: Thanks and nice to hear from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: I appreciate your nice comments. Thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks so much for your reply. It's nice to know this brought you some good memories. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: I always appreciate hearing from you. Thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
ohhhhh lovely lovely nostalgic moments i could feel how much you wanted to just stay a while longer. i love this one thank you for a lovely moment betty lou hugs from june xxxxxx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
june: I'm so glad you liked this! It was a nice memory of one of my childhood homes, but as you say, nostalgic! Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Betty, You are so in touch with life and nature. I am reading through and I can see how deep your faith is. I do not cease to be impressed. Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thanks so much for finding this and making such lovely comments! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile as it makes me smile to know of the many parents and grandparents who share the brilliant gifts of nature to their children and the memories and stories they tell are like friendly ghosts passing by! (kiss on cheek) I love this, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thanks. Sharing our history with our friends and family, draws us all closer together. Betty Lou Hebert |
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