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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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A Day to Dream The morning showed a mist that clung To every tree and also hung In forest aisles, like draperies, That swayed and floated on each breeze. By noon, it all had burned away And morning skies, so dim and gray, Had turned to blue, with just a few Small, puffy clouds, that drifted through. The afternoon was warm and sweet. The dry leaves rustled as my feet Pursued the path beside the stream. A day to linger and to dream. The evening drew down to a close And clouds of amber, orange and rose, Be-decked the west, outdid the sun. Heaped praises on the day just done! Then as the darkness of the night Both captured and then slew the light, The dome of Heaven graciously Flung silver stars, for all to see! Betty Lou Hebert Published by National Library of Congress, 1996 and in Morning song, 1996 [This message has been edited by Trillium (08-23-2003 12:26 AM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh my goodness....this was beautiful!!!!!! Lovely, lovely words!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
There is no end to your roster of good poetry. This is lovely. Joyce |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
The imagery and feeling in this one really made me feel like I was seeing all of this in a cycle of my reading...I'm putting this in my Private Library! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful Betty Lou. The images I saw through your words were simply breathtaking. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: Thanks for your flattering comments. It makes me happy to know you really liked this. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Your remarks are more than kind! Thanks so much. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Symphony: Thanks a lot! Putting this in your library is a really nice compliment! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue; Nice to hear from you and thanks for your lovely remarks! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (08-23-2003 07:20 PM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Just a perfect picture I see through your words  Eliza Simmons |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza; Thanks for your nice comments. Always appreciate hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yes. What a beautiful day you had. Thanks for sharing, Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (08-24-2003 11:02 AM).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thanks for reading and leaving your nice comment. Betty Lou Hebert |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is so beautiful. The last stanza breathtaking. Maggie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Maggie: Thanks for your lovely comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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