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cusick
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0 posted 2003-08-19 05:48 AM


Frustration

When I was small
and trees
touched the sky,
paradise was easy
to breach.

Now I am taller
trees are smaller,
heaven is just
out of reach.


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-08-19 08:28 PM


Very nice.  Anything is possible when you're small.  Good job of expressing your frustration.  Joyce
cusick
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2 posted 2003-08-20 05:30 AM


Thank you Joyce. Maggie
eor
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blues & greys
3 posted 2003-08-22 06:22 PM


ah the realization of life, liked this...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

cusick
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4 posted 2003-08-23 06:39 AM


Thank you so much Eor. Maggie
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-08-23 10:05 AM


So close, and yet so far. One of those feelings that you just *sigh* and go about your way. I liked this alot!!! It took me inside that feeling. Wow.

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
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6 posted 2003-08-24 09:15 AM


Thank you Shararose, a bit of nostalgia. Maggie
Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-08-25 01:53 AM


brilliant write cusick yeah things were simpler and nothing impossible in our eyes back then
cusick
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8 posted 2003-08-25 10:21 AM


Thank you Aenimal, it seems so long ago. Maggie
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