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Saturday Light

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

0 posted 2003-08-19 09:13 AM

Saturday Light

Watching the coloured lights
flashing through spectrums,
I sit in a dark corner
With a stranger,
feeling the walls.

The spotlight has gone
no longer illuminating my soul.
In one quick movement
I realise
I no longer seek the spotlight.

The music is strong,
but I cannot hear.
In my head
I have my own music,
repeating the same song.

The stranger turns to me,
and smiles through cigarette rainbows.

In a crowd of aliens
I feel normal.

I want to cry,
but my eyes are busy with the lights.

[This message has been edited by gringakiwi (08-20-2003 04:30 AM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-19 09:37 AM

I am glad the lights were keeping you busy, but I am

with you. Sending a

SharaRose @--<--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

gringakiwi
Member

since 2003-08-05

Posts 189

2 posted 2003-08-20 04:32 AM

Thanks shararose for your kind words... I wasn't too sure about this poem- I was very confused when I wrote it and that was what I was trying to get across!

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