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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-18 10:40 PM


Rubber Band Where You Were

I once heard
When sadness fills one's heart from within,
One can shoot
A rubber band,
To clear all the stars above.

I would very much like to play
This
Star-bowling game with you.

Yet tonight,
My shadow was my only guest;
I got left alone facing the stars...

Promises once sworn
Were now broken.
You said you would
Love me regardless.

Yet when now we had to face
A nail in each of our hearts,
You said
You did not love me no more.

Why couldn't you just
Give me a chance,
A chance to make up
Our past,
A chance to wipe away
Those tears,
Those tears that made us cry.

If you wanted
To leave me, please
Please don't kiss me.

Don't leave me
Any hopes in finding you
Again.

Please...why are you so harsh
To me?
You gave me hugs
Sometimes when I was about to leave.

Yet you kept
Me crazy, caused you acted
In opposition to your words.

Please don't hide...
Don't hide your true feelings.
Don't say you never loved me.

Or maybe you did never loved me.
If so, please tell me
Once last time, and I
Would disappear from your sight...
Disappear from your sight...

Rubber band where are you,
I miss you...

©Aug 18, 2003
Eliza Simmons



Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-20-2003 01:25 PM).]

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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-08-19 09:42 AM


too bad there are misunderstandings.
sending a
SharaRose @-->--

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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-08-19 11:14 AM


ElizaDear~
You wordplay so expertly ... your thoughts continually bring me back to read you~
I guess that's a rubberbanding of one sort, eh ?

Love you dear one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2003-08-19 03:14 PM


Marge your comments are always delightful and flatter me Thanks for dropping by.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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