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Wicked Temptress

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-08-13 09:23 AM

Tinkling laughter.
Green tresses flow
snake like over naked shoulders.

Arms temptingly close,
invite me to her sparkling,
rippling haven.

Look away.
Anywhere.

One last glance into
mocking, irresitible eyes,
drawn like a magnet

to cold, wet arms
hold me tight as
I gasp for air,

we descend to her
watery paradise.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-08-13 11:39 AM

Oh my ... I really like the imagery of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ShadowRaven
Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 51

2 posted 2003-08-14 02:36 AM

The title of this really interested me - and then the imagery in the writing pulled me in.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2003-08-14 10:21 AM

Thank you Marge and Shadow. Maggie

Magia_negra
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 77
CA, USA

4 posted 2003-08-14 05:09 PM

Beautiful!... Kinda scary though

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
mi vida...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2003-08-14 07:51 PM

very descriptive. Joyce

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-08-15 03:54 PM

Thank you Joyce. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2003-08-15 03:57 PM

Thank you Marge Negra. Maggie

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

8 posted 2003-08-15 11:04 PM

Visually interesting post - I enjoyed.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

9 posted 2003-08-16 08:51 AM

Thank you Spirit. Maggie

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