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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-08 04:20 PM


Touch You Secretly

Sitting beside you tonight,
Feeling your loneliness with my breath,
I touch your forehead
Evading your notices.

Singing a song as you lay there,
Feeling your skin as you're asleep,
I touch your hands
Privately in prayers.

I pray softly as my tears,
Running down my cheeks to your hands.

Sitting beside you tonight,
Feeling your pain in my chest,
I touch your frail hair
Afraid I will awake you.

Singing a song as you lay there,
Feeling your chain as you close your eyes,
I touch your lips
Secretly love you in my mind.

Secretly love you under the moon,
Tranquilly guard you as you sleep.

(speaking)
Tonight I will let you have my bed,
I will lay on my couch in the next room.

(c)Aug 8, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-08-2003 04:26 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-08-08 07:12 PM


Eliza~
Just a *sigh* of lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2003-08-08 07:48 PM


Eliza:  Such a sensitive and gentle write. I loved it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-08-08 08:01 PM


this shows much feeling Eliza a true poet's touch.  Love, Joyce
pegasus111
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4 posted 2003-08-09 06:57 AM


tender and loving..nicely done

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



cusick
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5 posted 2003-08-10 08:27 AM


I loved this . such tender feeling written from the heart. Maggie
SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-08-15 11:04 PM


Lovely, pillow talk whispers. Full of
So tender.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

SPIRIT
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7 posted 2003-08-15 11:09 PM


A sensitive and tender piece = a most enjoyable read.
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