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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Touch You Secretly Sitting beside you tonight, Feeling your loneliness with my breath, I touch your forehead Evading your notices. Singing a song as you lay there, Feeling your skin as you're asleep, I touch your hands Privately in prayers. I pray softly as my tears, Running down my cheeks to your hands. Sitting beside you tonight, Feeling your pain in my chest, I touch your frail hair Afraid I will awake you. Singing a song as you lay there, Feeling your chain as you close your eyes, I touch your lips Secretly love you in my mind. Secretly love you under the moon, Tranquilly guard you as you sleep. (speaking) Tonight I will let you have my bed, I will lay on my couch in the next room. (c)Aug 8, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. ~Yesterday insult, today gain. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-08-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Just a *sigh* of lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Such a sensitive and gentle write. I loved it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this shows much feeling Eliza a true poet's touch. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
tender and loving..nicely done the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I loved this . such tender feeling written from the heart. Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Lovely, pillow talk whispers. Full of  So tender.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A sensitive and tender piece = a most enjoyable read. |
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