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edwreck02
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since 2003-08-08
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0 posted 2003-08-12 10:10 PM


Mama

You know living it up
Alone with your mama
Makes a kid like me
Appreciate
I celebrate
All the wonders my mama has
Bestowed upon me
Love and electricity
Compassion and clothing
Most importantly
I cannot dismiss my lil sis

Watching your mama night and day
Day and night
Coming home all worn
Just so I could sleep
All warm in the sheets that smelt
Like her sweetness...
Oh how I adorn her
Above all people
Nothing in life could prove an equal.

So to this day I close my eyes
And never deny the lord
My appreciation for her
Creation
A satisfied soul I rest my case
I rest my head and let her
Scent take me to bed

© Copyright 2003 Eduardo Sanders - All Rights Reserved
SPIRIT
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California Desert
1 posted 2003-08-13 04:35 PM


What a lovely tribute. Very sweet.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-08-13 09:47 PM


Eduardo~
What a loving tribute to your mother~

My children, now grown, have often told me how they loved the scent of me tucking them in~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2dalimit
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3 posted 2003-08-14 07:10 AM


It's refreshing to read from someone, young, that has recognized the value of "mama".

Thanks,
Melton

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4 posted 2003-08-14 07:42 PM


We can never give our mothers enough credit and I am glad you have tried.  Love, Joyce
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-08-14 10:38 PM


oh a beautiful tribute to your Mama.
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6 posted 2003-09-20 12:52 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I believe there is nothing mnore beautiful than being tucked in, hugged, or kissed from a dear mother, as we are always growing with them and they teach us to love and feel loved! (big hugggsssssss) Your mother will awlays be proud of you and love you so much, this is a true treasure forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eduardo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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7 posted 2003-09-22 06:13 PM




“Love and electricity
Compassion and clothing”


What a sweet and innocent way of appreciating your Mama.
Reminds me of my dear mom, after my dad passed when I was five. Working all day, only to come home to tend to the needs of her six kids. I never knew how  “tired and worn” she was until I got older. Because, she never really showed it. Probably because, she didn’t have time to.

Bless the mother’s of the world. There can never be enough admiration, respect and gratitude expressed about them.

And bless you too Ed. Your a good son!

Well Done!


Richy

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