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Men's Weakness

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-08-09 09:12 PM

Men's Weakness

One drop of fresh
Water from the spring,
Makes breathing in summer more easy.
An old saying that men couldn't
Escape women luring.

Oh isn't that true about
Men are all about horny,
That none can be relied on, for life.
So here comes a test of fifteen beauties
Dancing in front of a lake.

The men couldn't see them
Clearly because of the smoke
And the silky curtains are
Swaying in front of them.
It would be interesting
To see their eyes go wild.

Let the men each take
One woman home and we observe.
The women are expansive,
And know only whining.

How long till the men flee
Away from the women?
And who will give thanks
To the ugly maid who
Patiently keep the house tidy?

(c) Aug 9, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-08-10 03:17 PM

Yes the old saying about beauty being more than skin deep still holds true. Well done, Aries. Joyce

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-08-11 04:58 PM

Delightful...making me laugh...are men really this bad...some desire the inner beauty of a woman...a soft heart, a tender kiss...James

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-08-12 01:05 PM

Eliza: i enjoyed your poem. Some things never change!

Betty Lou Hebert

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