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cusick
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0 posted 2003-08-07 12:01 PM


I have a secret
I'll never impart,
To keep it forever
close to my heart.

Deep inside
I'll always be true.
Oh go on then
I'll just tell you.

© Copyright 2003 cusick - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-08-07 01:11 PM


I loved this!  I wrote something with a similar line (I think it was "My Secret") and I did end up telling one person and they stomped all over my secret!!! Ah...anyway...I digress

This was short and very cute!!

Susan C.

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-08-08 07:55 PM


A secret isn't a secret if you tell.  This is fun.  Joyce
pegasus111
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3 posted 2003-08-09 06:59 AM


a fun piece indeed... hard to keep a secret from everyone. it is our nature to communicate.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Trillium
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4 posted 2003-08-09 02:04 PM


cusick:  A clever write and I really enjoyed it. How many people know now?

Betty Lou Hebert

cusick
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5 posted 2003-08-18 08:06 AM


Trillian, now it is on internet it could be millions. Thanks for reading. Maggie
cusick
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6 posted 2003-08-18 08:08 AM


Thank You Susan Joyce and Pegasis. Maggie
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