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Shattered Dreams.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-08-03 09:51 AM

SHATTERED DREAMS

I saw the sadness in her eyes
and knew that it is over.
No more would I linger
in sweet ecstasy,
in once warm arms
grown Cold like
Winter's snowy peaks.

She knew .

Desire lay like
ashes between us.
One brief dalliance
from our sacred bastion
denied me all my
tomorrows dreams.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2003-08-03 10:53 PM

Very sad.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2003-08-04 07:23 AM

this is a very good piece. well done my friend.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2003-08-04 08:43 AM

Thank you Denise and Pegasis.Maggie

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-08-04 06:58 PM

Sad and lovely. Joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-08-04 09:42 PM

Maggie~
This is really just lovely~
Soft and so real~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2003-08-05 12:12 PM

This is indeed sad. I just know there is someone perfect for you out there waiting for you to find her when the time is right.

Dawn

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2003-08-05 08:15 AM

Thank you all for replying. Maggie

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