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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-07-23 08:35 PM

Wings to fly away
freedoms flight on gentle winds
one with sea and sky

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2001-07-23 09:17 PM

Ellie-
   You do these so well..
   this is beautiful..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-07-23 11:21 PM

Really beautiful! I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-07-23 11:26 PM

Well done as usual. Joyce

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2001-07-24 06:01 AM

Really enjoyed this one. It is so peaceful and pleasant.

Melton

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-07-24 01:47 PM

Very, very nice, Ellie

Melissa~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-07-24 04:00 PM

Beautiful! I've always wished I could fly and sometimes I dream I can. It's a great feeling!

Betty Lou Hebert

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2001-07-24 07:13 PM

Very pretty.

Hugs,
Deb

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 2001-07-24 09:08 PM

That says it all! Very nice, Ellie!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2001-08-07 08:29 PM

This has such a peaceful feel to it, I love it !

Maree

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

10 posted 2001-08-10 08:51 PM

Lovely. The mostest with the minimalist. :-)

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

11 posted 2001-08-11 11:05 PM

I wished I had a pair of wings.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

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