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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-07-18 11:42 AM



Because..

I love you
Because
You have shown me happiness
Is attainable

I love you
Because
You walk down the street
With me on the inside

I love you
Because
You will not let me
Open a door

I love you
Because
You think of me
Before yourself

I love you
Because
I see the love in your eyes
When you look at me

I love you
Because
You have shown me
How to be a whole person again

~Yo lo amo mi Angel~



© Copyright 2003 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2003-07-19 12:10 PM


This is a refreshing read.. it is so wonderful to find someone sharing their happiness of found love. I wish you continued happiness.
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2003-07-19 02:08 PM


An old fashioned guy who is not afraid of being a protector.  I like that.  Joyce
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-07-20 10:59 AM


Seems like all the old school ways aren't considered cool, or in synch with the times, or politically correct. I love the days of old. In times gone by people revered their fellow man, and a hand extended for a hand shake, a smile, and a hello, or a thank were the way things were without question. Courtesies, and a sense of reverance for another never go out of style. I loved this!!!!  

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BrokenWingedAngel
Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60

4 posted 2003-07-24 01:19 AM


I'm glad you've found someone to make you so happy!!  I really enjoyed reading this, and the last stanza stands out.  Great job

BWA

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
5 posted 2003-07-24 01:52 PM


Great read. I liked ...I love you
Because
I see the love in your eyes
When you look at me...

most of all.

Melton

missmisery61
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56

6 posted 2003-07-24 02:24 PM


I love you
Because
You think of me
Before yourself

And that my friend, is what love is truly, all about.  Well done.

pegasus111
Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
7 posted 2003-07-25 06:38 AM


I loved this because....it is so true...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
8 posted 2007-12-06 02:38 PM


and I love it too...

lucky

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