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wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2003-07-15 06:27 PM

under the nightlight
womanshands
stretch skyward to grasp

the golden glow

weeps
overflows
to bless dancing feet

hand-to-hand
to encompass the world
heartbeats sway
as hosannas
pour forth
in one voice

spiraling

up to the moon
we sing the secret of joy

Alnilam
Member

since 2003-07-04

Posts 75

1 posted 2003-07-15 09:13 PM

i liked this...it was very touching, well done, and it intrigued me. good job, thanks for the read.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-07-15 09:26 PM

Most enjoyable. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-07-15 10:19 PM

wordancer: This is haunting!

Betty Lou Hebert

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

4 posted 2003-07-16 08:49 AM

another scintillating ride from a master of words. loved this piece

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2003-07-16 08:54 AM

a great poem. wonderful play of words and a most impressive style. i give ti two thumbs up. keep up the good work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

6 posted 2003-07-16 09:18 AM

oooh peg...you said 'scintillating'

(popping that word in my wordbag, i haven't seen it in a while)

Thanks everyone for your comments.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-07-16 10:41 AM

WordDancer~
How pleasured I am to see your poetic thoughts~
Just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

8 posted 2003-07-16 08:11 PM

I loved this and felt I should go out and dance in the moonlight and embrace my womanhood once again.

Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

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