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One moment

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-07-03 04:40 PM

Take me once more, all of me,
To our dreamlike place of ecstasy
Gather my mind, my body and all
Then send my soul spinning
Like a glass mirror ball
Steal my breath away
Leave lifes skin behind
Melt us together
Sweet indulgence in mind
Every cell will be fizzing
Nerves set aflame
In that moment of pleasure
Just a heartbeat from pain
Nothing exists other than this
In this exraordinary moment
There is only bliss

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2003-07-03 06:04 PM

Steal my breath away
Leave lifes skin behind
Melt us together

This sizzles... and is yet so tender... which does indeed lead to bliss. *S* Great write! *S*

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-07-03 10:12 PM

Ooooh, I love this! Well done! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

3 posted 2003-07-04 03:10 AM

thank you so much suthern and chris. i had a little passion there that needed speaking lol.

hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxxx

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

4 posted 2003-07-04 07:35 PM

I like it. It is more than a "little" passionate.

Thanks,
Melton

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-07-05 03:24 AM

Dear Melton,
thank you for that. it always means a lot to me when someone reads and enjoys my work.

hugs from june xxx

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