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TheGoalie Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny |
-Again- Hopes. Dreams. Fears. If they meant so much to us, Then why did sharing mine With you amount to nothing But heartache and the knowledge That you do not wish to be mine? Heading for home with a bandaged Wrist and wounded pride, I Will do my best to drown you out With another beer and more cigarettes. Even sleep will not quell the tempest In my head, for in dreams I see the Torment and anguish brought daily Upon my young heart. Hopes. Dreams. Fears. I will go to sleep tonight a man, But wake tomorrow a boy again, Afraid of a broken heart, but Dreaming of hope and love. "Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef" |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Joe, i could feel the emotions running high in this piece, keep it up! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You express vry well the growing pains of some loves. Joyce |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Wow, very good poem...full of emotion and questioning. Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
brings back some memories...thank you |
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