Corner Pub #2 |
Sunshine Can't Touch |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Sunshine Can't Touch When the wind seems to be intolerable, Sunshine gives passerby a ting of hope, That somehow lights will outlast moody cloud. Yet sunshine is so mild that it seems Too weak for a match with the wind. Too weak yet a comfort song... of nature play. Sunshine can't touch the wind- The wind that hurts our skin, And stirs at heart. Yet sunshine touches the sky- The air that we breathes, And keep us fresh. When the wind seems to be intolerable, Sunshine gives passerby a ting of hope, That somehow lights will outlast moody cloud. Yet sunshine is so mild that it seems Too weak to dual with the wind. Too weak yet in the whispering word Found the missing touch Of words. Thousand might have said the words before, Thousand might have laughed with me before, Yet how many thousand of them Are from yours, and only yours... heart. Thousand of path might have found, Thousand of truth might have known, Yet I have chosen yours. And you? Will you do the same? (c)May 23, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice, Eliza. Joyce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunshine is always here, Eliza...always... and sunshine warms, even in the cold... we just have to be very clever about how it comes about! |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
sunshine is soul lifting. always. hugs from june x |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ This is just beautiful !!! I greatly enjoy the way your thoughts flow~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, i love this, the sequence, ur emotions, everything! Hugs Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Very interesting chain of thought in this poem. I enjoyed it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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