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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-07-08 09:12 PM

Encased in beauty...
Scented robe of elegant color,
enfold my spirit.

This garden in twilight...

Warmth of summers stillness..
Fountains liquid song..

Serenity sublime!

Incomparable gift,
humbly received.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-09-2001).]

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-07-09 06:40 AM

lovely piece, Ellie..did you mean incomparable?

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2001-07-09 06:50 AM

thanks Peg, Faerie dust on the spell check???

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2001-07-09 05:10 PM

I didn't notice faerie dust, just a beautiful poem!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-07-10 07:11 PM

Beautifully done, Ellie!

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07

Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

5 posted 2001-07-11 06:24 PM

i really enjoyed this it had excellent imagery and i reallyu enjoyed the way you structured it, i dug it

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-07-11 08:08 PM

I like the humility of this piece. Lovely. Joyce

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

7 posted 2001-07-13 09:10 AM

Oh so lovely Ellie ~ brings a smile this morning. Bonnie

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

8 posted 2001-07-14 08:54 AM

Awwww! The serenity of twilight. A pretty picture.

Melton

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

9 posted 2001-07-15 05:56 PM

Beautiful poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

10 posted 2001-07-15 08:09 PM

A beautiful snapshot of serenity..lovely.

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

11 posted 2001-07-17 09:50 PM

Nice images.

You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-07-18 10:17 PM

Ellie, as always, I enjoy the optimism and serenity of your poems. Very lovely. But, then again, I've come to expect no less of you

Take care,
Melissa~

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

13 posted 2001-07-18 10:46 PM

I feel like I am copying people
but what can I say that hasn't been said
it is simply beautiful!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2001-07-23 03:09 PM

Ellie-
   Simply beautiful, my friend..
   Nicely done..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

15 posted 2001-07-25 08:05 AM

This is so lovely. I feel that I've been in your garden
Liz

BloomingRose
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Florida

16 posted 2001-07-25 03:35 PM

Beautiful, as always.

Hugs,
Deb

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