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Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

0 posted 2001-07-08 08:09 PM

At best I empathize
while in solitude I specialize
allowing no one to scrutinize
my covert eyes
My heart's courage I cannibalize
so loneliness I maximize
and my body try to galvanize
My fears I metabolize
or my will they crystalize
and occasionally I realize
the months and years go by

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2001-07-09 06:44 AM

I like this..It has a rap tempo that is attractive.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

2 posted 2001-07-10 11:01 AM

You've added a unique rhythm and rhyme to a simple truth - we can be our own worst enemy, allowing fear to keep us in lonely isolation and steal away the years. I like this very much.

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

3 posted 2001-07-11 07:43 AM

Such eloquence, in such a small space!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-07-11 08:15 PM

Oh, I like this very much. Why don't more words have rhyming partners for us. Joyce

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

5 posted 2001-07-11 08:35 PM

Thank you all for reading, this one is not my usual in that it rhymes so much and so obviously, but that was the point and I am glad that you liked it

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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