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DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

0 posted 2003-05-08 03:55 PM

Ribbons of Rain

Ribbons of rain gently tickle my senses
Inviting me to remember your gentle aura
Brightening the day as you quietly enter
Beginning of new dreams solving creation’s enigma
Odyssey of life carrying us along path
Nature’s way of repairing a broken landscape
Sunshine breaking through clouds sparking beautiful rainbow

Oasis from rain experienced through your touch
Flowering visuals granting many eyes new stimuli

Ribbons of rain softly invigorating my spirit
A fresh outlook on new challenges to meet
Icy days of winter leading into springtime
Narrating stories of love with gentle hand.

[This message has been edited by DawnG (05-08-2003 04:05 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-05-08 06:03 PM

Dawn~
This is just an AWESOME write~
Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-05-09 10:18 AM

Lovely indeed. Joyce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-09 01:56 PM

very delightful

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

4 posted 2003-05-09 10:53 PM

Marge,

Thank you for your reply saying my poem was awesome. The poem started as a challenge from a friend and then as I was writing it realized that I was actually writing a double acrostic without knowing it at first. The last letters of every line spell out one of my best friend's names.

Joyce, Yes, there are so many things about life that are very lovely. Rain bringing forward new growth and my friend being just two of them.

Passing Shadows, This poem was indeed a delight to write as well.

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2003-05-13 06:36 PM

I enjoyed reading this piece very much.

Marilyn

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-05-13 08:42 PM

Very nice, Dawn... I'm visualizing those rainy ribbons...

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