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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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there's a feeling for softness thats wanted, a need, to crack the shell and reveal... the scented, the perfumed inside, to let the falls wall with eclosion and bid the stiffness to hide. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nothing like getting to the meat of things. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I liked this ... but, I didn't understand 'eclosion', in the way you used it. Would you clarify your intenion for me ?  I'm having a blonde night !  I know that the 'eclosion' I'm thinking of relates to - The emergence of an adult insect from a pupal case or an insect larva from an egg. *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I like it, have to say dont know anything about eclosion or not so I just made up a suitable meaning for my convenience  Thanks for a good read! Love, Liz xxx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Hey! Thanks for the replies, Marge and ESP, about Eclosion, I didn't mean it in a very scientific way, just the image of yes like an egg shell cracking with the chick inside or when the butterflies leaves it little sca and becomes a butterfly  Just the release really... hope that answers your question! Thank you Joyce too for your comments love, Claire xx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ I told you I was having a blonde night ! Well .... this morning while sitting outside having my quiet coffee .. this piece was on my mind ... then it DAWNED on me !!! Now how's that for writing something that stays with the reader ???? Duh .... I got it ! Honest I did ! Whew .... was I ever glad when I came in and saw your response ! Thankee for gracing the Corner Pub with your poetic insight~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Marge! wow, my poem made an impression on someone, well, you've really made my day I'm glad it made sense to you in the end and don't worry, most of my nights are blonde nights love, Claire xx "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Claire, I like this ^_^ Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
passing shadows : thank you for your sweet words misnight wandering : as always, your kind words are making me blush "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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