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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-04-29 07:52 PM

Tangled threads of miscellaneous thought
accumulated debris,
Fragments of experience
nostalgia in assembly.

Hoarded away in layers of dust
redundant and undisturbed,
Are suddenly, surprisingly
awoken and perturbed.

Feelings and words are welling up
and eddying to the surface,
Forgotten dreams that i had lost
now finally have their purpose.

In its bid to be free
my mind is secretly churning,
Desperately seeking a way to express
and a let out for its yearning

I pick up my pen with sweet relief,
the words come stuttering first,
Then cascading fast and free
quenching an inner thirst.

Exhausted now but satisfied
with a smile that says it all,
I've finally found a let out
i just let the words freefall

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-04-29 10:15 PM

And how nicely they formed. Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-04-30 07:06 AM

Very true indeed! Its amazing how you can put simple thoughts into a constructive piece like this

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-04-30 12:16 PM

June~
Truly amazing how the spill of ink is a comforting relief of feelings too long stored away~

Let it flow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2003-04-30 03:47 PM

junemac: I really enjoyed this poem. I know that feeling of having a lot to say, but can't quite seem to find the right beginning. Once you do, it's a joy to let the words flow!

Betty Lou Hebert

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2003-04-30 04:26 PM

this is cool

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

6 posted 2003-05-01 05:53 PM

joyce. thank you for saying they formed nicely. i was hoping so :0)

michelle thanks i liked the constructive comment. i like to think so.

marge and betty, oh yes its wonderful to finally let the words freefall. this is a fairly recent occurance for me.

eliza i like cool !!!! thanks.
you are all so lovely to take the time to comment on my poem thanks.

hugs from june x

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-05-26 03:38 AM

wonderful!

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

8 posted 2003-05-26 07:59 PM

Wow, now I can breath. Thanks. This is good.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

9 posted 2003-05-26 09:50 PM

Positively glorious...wonderful feeling, isn't it? Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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