Dust my heart for fingerprints

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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-04-28 07:44 PM

Dust my heart for fingerprints

Dust my heart for fingerprints,
see what you can find,
should it tell a story,
then tell me what you find.

If there is some denting,
no longer does it pain,
don't pity me for heartache,
your sorrow is in vain.

Should you see a tear or two,
or a gaping hole, don't fear,
the pain of it is just an ache,
when memories get too near.

Check the swelling while your there,
the bruises may be many,
each of them a seperate love,
regrets i havent any.

Each tender spot you notice,
bears witness to loves touch,
impressions from so many,
without which my lifes not much.

So go ahead and look at me,
im not afraid to hide,
a million tiny fingerprints,
my heart it wears with pride.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2003-04-29 03:33 AM

Dear June,

ur poem is amazing! i love it for the realisticness. its inspiring!
especially love this:
a million tiny fingerprints,
my heart it wears with pride.

keep it going ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-04-29 08:59 AM

OhJune~
This is just sooooooooooo 'touching'~

'regrets i havent any.

Each tender spot you notice,
bears witness to loves touch,
impressions from so many,
without which my lifes not much.

So go ahead and look at me,
im not afraid to hide,
a million tiny fingerprints,
my heart it wears with pride.'

I just want to Awwwwwwwwwwwww !

You are such a welcomed addition to our little gathering spot ~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-04-29 04:50 PM

junemac: I am intrigued by the title and the poem! Very clever and touching to read. Hope you are enjoying this site.

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

4 posted 2003-04-29 04:57 PM

michelle, marge and trillium, thank you so much for having a look at this one and for saying really nice things. i worry about my poems ( just as i am sure you all do ) and although i write them down because they make sense to me, i am never sure if they do to others. it means so much to me to know that you understood me perfectly, bless you all.

hugs to my new friends

june x

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2003-04-29 05:20 PM

I really do like this. Very well written and touching. Joyce

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

6 posted 2003-04-29 05:43 PM

thanks joyce,
i enjoyed writing it too. i feel that we are all enriched by those who come into our lives.

x june x

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

7 posted 2003-04-29 06:45 PM

yes, this is well written! I LOVE THIS

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

8 posted 2003-04-30 03:53 PM

awwwww thank you aries. i appreciate your reading this and letting me know you enjoyed it.

hugs from june x

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

9 posted 2003-04-30 10:02 PM

this is such a good poem! very beautiful and touching. i could relate to it so much. you did a wonderful just describing everything!

peaceful_dreamer

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

10 posted 2003-05-01 12:09 PM

The title really drew me in and the poem was not disapointing. I really loved it. Will be looking for more of your poems.

leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

11 posted 2003-05-01 12:17 PM

Dear June,
This poem is so touching and beatiful, I really do, Honestly love this poem.. It was thought out very great and i am really looking forward to hearing more of your poems.......
Love ya always
Ashgiel

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

12 posted 2003-05-01 03:07 PM

dear peaceful-dreamer, i appreciate your lovely comments. thank you so much. its hard to tell when you write somthing, if people will see things your way.

hugs june x

dear songbird ( love the name bye the way ) thanks for your words.
hugs june x

dear ashgiel, i am so glad you enjoyed this so much. thank you for telling me how much you appreciated it.
hugs from june x

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