Corner Pub #2 |
Atmosphere |
Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
I'm floating with a map of the world underneath my feet. My weightlessness has just begun. As if I'm changing... and the solid body I'm containing is only now reaching some liquid state. Transparent from the ocean waves forming rapidly below This new world is painted in a thousand colors- reflecting the clouds hidden way above. I feel this presence overcoming and absorbing Somewhat similiar to the sugar in my coffee every morning... the routine; a simple reminder of the chaos i sacrificed, while sinking in the melting sun of Then. I've reached a new moment. A new distance Suddenly Simply LIVING Inside this grander scale. As I soar higher, I briefly touch the future and know the pattern that is emerging. To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This sounds like a wonderful experience. Especially to see the pattern of the future! Betty Lou Hebert |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i really really enjoyed this, it has a good form to it and the subject matter was deeper than most people choose to go around here, bravo, i dug it. "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I just love that finishing stanza! Great! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you for this journey of new enlightenment. A good read and presented very well. Melton |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
OMG! I haven't told you I love this yet? I've read it! I can assure you of that, girl! |
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Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
thanks all of you, you make me feel so good...sorry i haven't replied but i have been out of town and away from my computer. thanks again To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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