Corner Pub #2 |
when the sun sets |
Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
when the sun sets, you seem to think about life. are we the only life forms on this planet? you think about life and what you've done. if i was to go, would i be ready? have i served my pupose? you think about whats to come. will i fall in love? will my life be what i want? you think about others. how are the people in iraq? how are our soldiers? you think about your mistakes. should i have said that white lie? does he know i didn't mean to yell? you think about your triumphs. were they proud of me too? should i be that proud about my self? it's funny when the sun sets, what such a thing can do. i'll try to be better tomorrow. when the sun sets... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
As long as we have tomorrow. Joyce |
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Tristan Junior Member
since 2003-03-12
Posts 29 |
especislly now that we're at war |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Very nice write, not enough people stop to think about whether they yelled or not.. more people should. I liked Tara |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and when the sun sets, it always again arises...very well done...softly smiling here.. I must have had my momma's will |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned..and much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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