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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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We failed ...And corrupted But all ...Are within Your wisdom. I use to think you're disppointed Then I think you're just hurt. Our foolish words Are sharpen spear To your heart... Yet you continue To open your arms Longing for... Our love in You ...and for others. I am a lost newcomer Who has lost her faith... Then... One day I met a bus driver Who belonged To the same church as I do. He started sharing his experience with God, And each day on the bus...was Was a blessing to my heart. God knows How to keep in touch with us. He touches us in his special way, He... Comes in all forms, Appears anywhere. He... He blessed me so much that I... Even this moment I may not be thankful, I... I can dare say there is a God... Named Jesus. //hey sorry all, this isn't my finest piece, please bear with me. ~Every girl has a dream within. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (03-05-2003 02:58 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
aries - you know when you spoke about the bus driver....I remember reading "some have entertained angels without even knowing." This is a very good piece. Keep the faith! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is far better than you think Dear Eliza. Bless your bus driver. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ 'God knows How to keep in touch with us.' My AMEN couldn't be any bigger~ This is so touching~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cupcake Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 116 |
Better than you think. Very nice. I'm a reader - not a writer. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: I thought this was very good! It is so believeable. I often talk to people I meet about my faith, so can imagine you and the bus driver also sharing this conversation. Betty Lou Hebert |
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