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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Here We Are Passing By Here we are- Talking to each other With empty words. Once we were- Chatting till midnight Now we meet... As if we are passing by. You were once- My deep reflections My feelings... Were pouring all to you Here I am- Still missing Your gentle words... My heart- Was broken The day we parted... A heart- Was broken And could never mend. A heart- Was broken But only I would know. ----------------------- Side note: I'm combining fantasy with reality... ----------------------- (c)Feb 19, 2003 Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And doing a very good job of it, Eliza. This is a nice poem. Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write...I enjoyed |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
The truth and fantasy mingle well and make for one lovely piece of writing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Your words are tenderly refreshing~ Keep it up, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Sad, but well written. Glad it's not all reality! Betty Lou Hebert |
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