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Trillium
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0 posted 2005-09-30 09:31 PM







Splendors of September

There should have been a day when I
Could say I watched September die.
A day to say farewell to all
The splendors of this month in fall.
A time of sunny, golden noons
And migratory, avian tunes.
Crispness in the morning hours.
Passing of the summer flowers.
The leaves that crunch beneath your feet
And pile up on the garden seat!

Pale skies, where smoke fades out the blue
And scents the air with deja vu.
I should have been aware that soon,
The rising of October's moon,
Would steal away the splendid sights
Of perfect days and brilliant nights.
Now it's too late, September's gone
And time is quickly moving on!


Betty Lou Hebert


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1 posted 2005-09-30 10:23 PM


Oh this is nice Betty.  And it is sad to see September leave.  Joyce
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2 posted 2005-10-01 08:27 AM


good one Betty. nice flow to it

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2005-10-01 09:01 AM


BettyLou~
YAH ! ... a poem in the PUB ...

This is simply BEAUTIFUL !

I, too, kissed September goodbye, with the hope for a beautiful October to come~
And on this day ... it did~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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4 posted 2005-10-01 11:58 AM


Lovely September farewell Betty Lou.
Let's hope we have a warm and colorful October.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2005-10-01 01:40 PM


Beautiful description of September leaving. It also reminded me to turn my calender over to October.
Enjoyed this very much!

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6 posted 2005-10-01 02:50 PM


Dear Joyce:

September is my favorite month of the year and I always hate to see the end of it! It has been raining here for three days, so hope for some nice weather again in October.

Love
Betty Lou

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7 posted 2005-10-01 02:50 PM


pegasus111:  Thanks for reading.  Always appreciate hearing from you.

Betty Lou

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8 posted 2005-10-01 02:51 PM


Dear Marge:  Thanks!  I am not the only one to feel sad at seeing September go!  It's been raining hard for three days

Love
Betty Lou

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9 posted 2005-10-01 02:53 PM


Nancy:  Thanks!  It's hard to believe it is October already!  Don't know where this year has gone!

Love
Betty Lou

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10 posted 2005-10-01 02:54 PM


inot2B:  Thanks for reading!  Nice hearing from you.

Betty Lou

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11 posted 2005-10-23 04:15 AM


Dear Betty Lou

This poem of yours made me sad!  I still love it though!  A wonderful write!

Love Verbena xo


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12 posted 2005-10-23 05:37 AM


Dear Verbena:  How nice to see your name here this very early morning!  I have been watching for you! Thanks for your comments and I suppose it is rather a sad poem. Autumn does that to me!

Love
Betty Lou

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13 posted 2005-10-30 09:37 AM


Again! You are the great one!!!!
xoxo
Barb

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14 posted 2005-10-30 01:37 PM


Beasley:  So nice to hear from you.  It's been awhile!  Thanks for the super comment!

Love
Betty Lou

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