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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Early in waken by raindrops, The sky seems to be dusty and grey. Her silver hair hanging down to my windows, I slightly push her hair away To see a face of busy traffic... On the dusty black pudding- the roads. Sweet lady, please give your grace, Smile to me... The world would be enlightened. "The world is full of injustices, How could I laugh?" you ask. I say, "And the world is Full of loneliness, That's the reason we need humor." Comeon, sweet lady, Let's forget what is real and start dreaming... I... I believe... The world will only better when dreams exists. Look...at the science... They were once claimed to be impossible. Fairness...stay in one mind. If you didn't do it, it will prevail...at last. So, lady, Would you dance with me, In accord to celebrate victory, That love, the triumph, Will always stay by our side. (Comeon, sweet lady,) Let's forget what is real and start dreaming... I... I believe... The world will only better when dreams exists. Look...at the science... They were once claimed to be impossible. Fairness...stay in one mind. If you didn't do it, it will prevail...at last. Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
aries - interesting view on life & the world around us. If only dreaming could make everything perfect. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Interesting dream Eliza. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ You write so charmingly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very interesting write. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
This one captures me: "And the world is Full of loneliness, That's the reason we need humor." |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
Nice! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very charming indeed |
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