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Fixed On You |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Fixed On You Listening to music, which Elevating the beat Surround my world, Swinging my sleeves Up in the air, forming A circle which slowly sets Below the earth, One arm after another My curtain-llike sleeves raise again. My mind at ease, my eyes are fixed On the reflection of another pair of fine eyes. Prehaps I speak too much And it vexs your tame, And that I complain too much, Which take me away from your arm length, But what I really am Is a heat of desire That seeking to reach out to you. (c)Jan 21, 2003 Eliza Simmons Maybe I am not praying...but I know... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: A provocative poem! Interesting images were created by it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
Interesting read. Wisdom comes with winters. ** Oscar Wilde. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good, descriptive, love it |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good poem Eliza. Joyce |
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