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Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2003-01-06 01:04 AM

Saying Goodbye

I watch the colour strain from the sky
until all that is left
against the sombre grey
is the black-green
of the dancing grape vine.

[[I wrote this mid last year, but hadn't posted it 'til now]]

-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-01-06 02:12 AM

Very colorful. Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-01-06 03:57 AM

Wow Lynn,

I like this so much! Full of nostalgy

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2003-01-06 06:56 AM

Hey girl, I like this...short poems aren't always easy you know...

good to read you sister kiwi..

K

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2003-01-06 05:03 PM

Very nice Yu Lan.. enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

5 posted 2003-01-07 07:03 PM

Thanks all - Joyce, Michelle, Kamla, Chris..
I quite like short poems..

I wrote this one on the night when I said goodbye to Takuya when he went back to Japan for a few months..

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-01-09 12:22 PM

Wine leaves
and twining vines.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

7 posted 2003-01-09 10:49 PM

Short and sweet - very fine indeed.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2003-01-10 02:17 AM

thanks! ^_^

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

9 posted 2003-01-10 06:52 PM

cool I thought it seem sad as the images were very vivid

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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