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CHILI
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0 posted 2002-11-30 04:47 PM

The air is icy with Winter's Breath
As Autumn's colors wane in death
Once bright leaves, turned to crackling brown
As Winter's King does don his crown

As each sunrise greets the frost nipped earth
Dawns fires bid adieu to dreams of Spring's rebirth
Recalling the past month's turns and twists
While enduring Old Man Winters chilly kiss

Houses and voices filled with holiday cheer
As families reacquaint at the end of the year
Stories of old and stories brand new
Entertaining tales are sure to ensue

Embers glow from dying evening fires
As the adults relax and young ones retire
Stars bright in the dark night sky
As we yet bid another year good-bye

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

1 posted 2002-11-30 04:54 PM

CHILI: Really nice poem! Brought back memories of autumn and now winter and the approaching holidays.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

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2 posted 2002-11-30 09:39 PM

This is nice Chili. Winter is just the right time for dreaming and re-acquainting. Joyce

CHILI
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3 posted 2002-11-30 09:58 PM

Betty, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment.

CHILI
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4 posted 2002-11-30 10:00 PM

Joyce, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment.

Denise

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5 posted 2002-12-01 10:35 AM

This has such a warm and cozy feel to it! Lovely, CHILI!

Marge Tindal

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6 posted 2002-12-01 10:51 AM

Chili~
A delightful morning read ... as the frost lays glistening on the ground~

Me ? I'd just as soon 'de-throne' the Winter King~
But ... that warm fire sounds sooooo inviting~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

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7 posted 2002-12-02 12:56 PM

Lovely poem. Very good description of Winter. I especially like "As Winter's king does don his crown."

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are, too late to change?" -Dishwalla-

CHILI
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8 posted 2002-12-02 01:39 AM

Denise, thanks for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment, they encourage me.

CHILI
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9 posted 2002-12-02 01:41 AM

Marge, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I think cozy fires are one of my favorite things to have during the winter season.

CHILI
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10 posted 2002-12-02 01:43 AM

WinterWren, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliments, that was my favorite line as well.

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind

11 posted 2002-12-02 05:04 PM

Nice capture of seasons changes.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

CHILI
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12 posted 2002-12-02 07:17 PM

aries, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment.

vlraynes
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13 posted 2002-12-03 12:53 PM

CHILI~
This is so beautifully penned.
I truly enjoyed reading this and the imagery was lovely.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

cherrylips
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since 2002-11-30

Posts 51
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14 posted 2002-12-04 07:11 AM

This is really nice , something I am glad you chose to share. I truly love seasonal poetry and this is an especially entertainig one, thanx dx

CHILI
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15 posted 2002-12-07 12:53 PM

Vicky, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment. I am glad you enjoyed it.

CHILI
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16 posted 2002-12-07 12:55 PM

cherrylips, thank you for taking the time to read and for your encouraging compliment.

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