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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

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Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-11-25 03:22 PM

Worry yet another day passed by,
Nothing happened with big surprises.
And when the turmoil faded away,
The sky was filled with golden laces.

//do you like it? BTW, which of my poems do you think is the best to represent my work?

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 2002-12-01 10:05 PM

This reminds me of the old saying that behind every cloud there is a silver lining.
Lovely thoughts, Eliza!

I think only you can decide which of your poems best represent you. I'd say to read through them all and see which ones strike a resonating chord within. Enjoy the adventure!

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-12-01 10:22 PM

thanks Denise, for replying! I thought this thread is going to die away. thanks. I'm choosing a poem to be read out load by others. That's why I'm asking for advice

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2002-12-02 12:46 PM

Golden laces, I really like that poem, some of that sadness in the beginning, then golden laces. Very good.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are, too late to change?" -Dishwalla-

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-12-02 02:44 PM

Eliza; This is charming! So often we worry about things that never come to pass and when the day is done, it turns out it was pleasant after all. You have written this very well.

Betty Lou Hebert

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-03 12:49 PM

Vivian~
I love the imagery in this piece.
Beautifully penned, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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