Corner Pub #2 |
Hope In A Bottle |
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Beyond the gently rolling sea beyond the stars that shine at night there is someone who calls to me a soothing sound in gentle flight across the vast and troubled space she whispers thoughts of peace and ease of times that held such charm and grace and tender love my heart to please I see that face in my minds eye so real in neural vision clear my heart in truth cannot deny the ache to feel you now right here Someday somehow, I know not where we’ll meet again of this I’m sure and then to you my love I swear forevermore it will endure the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
"message in a bottle"s used to intrigue me, this is truly a unique touch to that special feeling of romance and anticipation! Smiles Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
If I could ever hope to write my very best, it would be just like this! I love to read your beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing, Romy |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A truly beautiful love poem. The title fooled me. I was afraid you had turned to drink. Love, Joyce |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem of love and hope. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ May your bottle always contain hope ... adrift on the sea of memories-in-the-making~ This is just real purty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Gentle romantic message in a bottle. Hope prevails where there is love! Deb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: This poem has a classic beauty to it. A wonderful read! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtakingly beautiful, Pagasus! Lovely! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
thank you my friends for your kind comments. where would we be without hope? in a dark and lifeless place I fear. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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