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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart and speaker of my soul, when your words fall on my soul I am moved and spellbound. There is within your writing what can only be described of as pure magic, anyone can write, but not everyone has the power to sway the audience. Perhaps I should amend that there are writers who can tap into the emotions of their readers, but there are fewer who can do it not just once, not just on the occasional poem but over and over and over again. YOU can and you do, you take the written word and transform it, you make it alive, and rooted in the reality of the world. I thank you always, for sharing the wonder, and showing me the colours that flow through my soul, you paint the rainbow darling heart and you do it with grace and abundant skill. As for this utterly utterly beautiful poem I say I love it absolutely, it is utterly splendiferous. Truly one that is a keeper darling heart, and so I shall place it with the rest of your sparkling gems in my heart’s treasure chest. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Oh my! Marge,I don't know if I can top the splendiferous comment above!Yipes !I can only reiterate.This,truly,is one of my favorites of yours.Offerings such as this eloquent profession of Love for the night sky immediately enter my "vault". Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963 [This message has been edited by Street Heart (11-12-2002 03:04 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely Marge, I look for the moon every night although the past 2 have been in hiding behind the rain clouds... I love these foreverly postcard poems hugs M |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, no one writes about the moon the way you do, dear lady. Unfortunately, it has been raining here since last Friday and I have not been able to see LaLuna. Thank you for reminding me what she looks like, enhanced only by your phenominal words. Huggles, Marti |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dear wonderful Marge, you never cease to amaze me. This like all the rest is beautiful. I've missed yaaaaaaa. Hugs, Juls |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh, I could use a moon right now, I'm pooped and worn out. It's far too late for me, but as you know....I love moons, especially yours Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely...I can't compete with above replies so won't even attempt! I was looking at the half-full moon earlier tonight, so this one really touched me and brought the memory of its beauty back. Super poem, great read, thanx! Keep em coming and we'll keep on reading!!!! Luv, Liz xx PS Did u get my email? Not sure if I have your correct address. lol. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is soooo beautiful. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Marge girl, I echo all the above. I believe you were moon-struck and the stars danced in your soul when you put pen to paper. Enough said. I stand and applaud with much admiration. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Half a thrill of moon in spill... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Once again you've spilled some delightful words upon the blue pages. Lovely indeed! Deb |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I LOve It! A very lyrical and image filled verse! It is a treasure for sure Thank you Margie for this sweet string of poetic phrases. LOvely, Lovely" Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyLovelyFriends~ It is a wonderful day to be 'magically' surrounded by the circling of such lovely friendships~ Thank you all from the heart of my little bottom~ spreads such rapture as to gently persuade the night to come again in heart of friend with everflowing light~ *Huglets* ~*MargeOfTheMoonlight*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Oh Marge this is so beautiful. The moon is magical for sure & you bring that magic out like no one else can. Love, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks for this gorgeous poem! I haven't seen the moon for so long.......raining here and cloudy all the time....................that I am basking in the glow of your poetry! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (11-13-2002 03:44 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gosh .... just how lucky can a poetess get ? You are ALL THE GREATEST~ Thank you for letting me share my little moon-spill all over your day and night~ ****Just for you ... BettyLou~ with teardrops held in place by the glow of dancing snow I'd send a trace of glowing face to my friend in Coeur D'Alene I'd send the moon full-phasing to spread such amazing light across her night So that Trillium and Ron could count the stars of far-beyond~ Is it a GREAT DAY TO BE A POET ... or WHAT ?? *Huglets* to ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Marge, I guess a lot of poeple saw this before I did, but I am so glad you saved a portion of your halfness for me. Love, Joyce |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge I think you already know how much I love your poems about the moon. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
oh my!! shaking my head in wonder here. great piece Marge. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ Ahhhhhh ... thank you for letting me share a little slice of this gorgeous moon~ SueTang~ Just love knowing that you enjoy them so~ Pegasus~ Awwwww ... thankee my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: That moon you sent to Idaho, Is shining with a silver glow And though it's raining, I can see It is rising there for me. A friendship moon defies the weather. Something we can share together!! Thank you so much! A special gift on my birthday! Love you Betty Lou |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge! So lovely! |
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