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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-11-09 09:00 PM

it's to precise
you try to fill
the piece with words so large
when people cannot fill buldings
that they build-
they stand empty
alone with a promise of
great becoming

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2002-11-10 01:56 PM

Those great becomings are filled with so much excitement, I think! Nice poem!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2002-11-15 12:41 PM

leafseranade~
I enjoyed this piece.
Agreeing with Denise...there IS much excitement
in new beginnings and in the anticipation of
what is to come.
Nicely said.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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