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Melody - Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-06-07 06:08 PM

Deep Springs farewell song
Warm symphony of promise
Summers Sonata

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

1 posted 2001-06-07 06:33 PM

Spring's a forerunner
Of e'en better things to come
Shall we say,"Well Done?"

Another beauty-and no question here, I will tell you,Ellie--"WELL DONE!"
David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-06-09 06:12 PM

I thought this was great!!!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2001-06-10 04:36 PM

This is lovely, Ellie!

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

4 posted 2001-06-12 10:45 AM

Very Nice,..

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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-06-14 09:56 PM

This is so beautifully expressed~

Take care,
Melissa~

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-06-15 01:53 PM

nice.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

7 posted 2001-06-15 11:02 PM

I'm always bummed to see and feel the summer sun scorch away the moist green of spring. I like the poem though.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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