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Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2001-06-06 11:38 AM

(Another children's story-poem for my niece)

Amazing Amanda most beautiful girl,
What will you wear today?
A polka dot sweater
And bell-bottomed pants

would probably look okay.

But… how about feathers, purple and green,
To wear in a tall, pointed hat?
A long orange skirt
And red checkered shirt,

I think you’d look great dressed like that!

Amazing Amanda, most beautiful girl,
Will you wear shiny rings on your toes?
And a small, Teenie-Weenie
Pink striped bikini

And dinosaur bones in your nose?

Perhaps you’d like flippers
to wear just like slippers,
A kangaroo coat would be neat
Or how bout a tutu to wear to the zoo to

And old moldy shoes for your feet?

Amazing Amanda most beautiful girl,
Will you wear seven braids in your hair?
And a purse filled with candy
would surely be dandy,

And tasty to take anywhere!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-06-07 07:08 PM

Very cute!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-06-08 05:14 AM

This warms my heart. Thanks for sharing.
Melton

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

3 posted 2001-06-08 06:35 AM

This fanciful version of dress up and make believe, is sure to capture the young heart- do you do illustrations as well?
Entertaining read,
David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

4 posted 2001-06-08 11:20 AM

Thank-you Denise, Melton and David!
The five little "Amanda" story-poems that I have written do have graphics included but they are not my own. My niece really enjoys reading little stories about herself! Writing easy little poems like this helps me wake up my muse!

[This message has been edited by Romy (edited 06-08-2001).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-06-08 06:44 PM

An adorable story for an adorable child. joyce

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