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Taking Chance in October

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-09-30 06:45 PM

Taking Chance in October (c) Eliza Simmons, Sept 30, 2002

September, the sign of fall,
is soon to be passed away.
October, her sister,
is going to take place soon.
Old dreams seem to be too vague,
Too fragile for the cold wind.
New dreams seem to be too rare,
Too lost to be find in dust.
Same old dreams, I need to give it up.
I need to start a new trail.
The sun...seems to be...far away.
I'm getting... all cold,
Even sunlight seems like not enough.
Same old talks, but I can't find new dreams
When I'm chatting old dreams.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.regardless our beliefs.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-09-30 09:33 PM

Perfectly lovely. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-09-30 10:17 PM

Eliza: Hope you find those new dreams to carry you through the winter. Like your poem very much.

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2002-10-01 08:31 AM

Winter does sometimes bring on the blues. Keep on writing and the blues will go away.

Thanks,
Melton

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