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Centuries of David

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2002-09-24 04:06 PM

A titan,
one man’s vision,
Mikey’s boy stands
as the dust of time

settles

a cloak on bare shoulders;
the youth waits unwavering
for goliath.

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2002-09-24 08:25 PM

I like this. Very good!

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2002-09-25 07:22 AM

the dancer shines again. my mind is filled with the power of this brief description of the ultimate confrontation.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-09-25 05:22 PM

Wonderful. Joyce

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2002-09-25 05:50 PM

Courage...and you have said it so well. Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2002-09-25 05:52 PM

very enjoyable read.

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

6 posted 2002-09-26 05:46 PM

Excellent write.

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