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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-09-22 12:32 PM

Softly
Each petal caresses the spirit.
This garden
of tranquility and wonder
soothing
fountain waters gracing senses.

Mystic abundance

There are Faeries here,
this final morn of summer.
With childlike delight,
enhanced by gardens endles flora,
one can sense their presence,
hear the beat of gossamer wings.
Playfully they dance and sing.
Unaware
and with joyful abandon,
that Autumn begins the morrow,
For sunbeams yet embrace
a Summers soft caress.

What matters they the seasons.
delighting
only in this moment,
this hour,
of lingering Summers kiss.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2002-09-22 12:39 PM

Oh, this is beautiful. It flows so smoothly. I enjoyed this.

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

2 posted 2002-09-22 01:39 PM

good job.

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2002-09-22 04:25 PM

Oh Ellie ~ What a beautiful read this afternoon, I felt as if I were there watching those sweet fairies ~ and saying a lovely farewell to summer. I've missed reading these beautiful weavings of yours. Bonnie

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2002-09-22 07:43 PM

Very beautiful, Ellie! All your poems are so lovely!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2002-09-22 08:02 PM

Ellie, this was pure magical delight. I enjoyed it so much.

Question? Where do our little faeries go in the winter? It's too cold for them to stay under the plants....

Hugs, Marti

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2002-09-22 10:06 PM

Dear Ellie, I always enjoy your poems on faeries. You seem to hve a corner on the market. Lovely, Joyce

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2002-09-25 07:07 AM

and the meek shall inherit the earth gentle lady. well done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-09-25 04:50 PM

ellie: Just enchanting!

Betty Lou Hebert

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

9 posted 2002-09-26 05:48 PM

ellie, I love the way this piece sounds. Thanks for sharing.

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