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Holly
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0 posted 2000-06-28 09:48 PM


Just to explain this a little bit...imagine you are completely in love with a person and you only truly realize this when they tell you they will be leaving your life for a matter of time. Not sure how long...that's where this small piece comes from.  


-Expressions of Love-

i can't tell you how much you mean to my being, I realized that the moment you said you would be leaving

i sit and wonder if we'll still feel the same when you come back, then my heart confirms our love is a fact

how do i live without your voice, your touch, your love, your kiss?
my soul starts to empty because it's you i will miss

i put on a cheerful face for your benifit--not mine
because when i'm alone i sit and start to cry

these months will certainly pass by so slow
but i'll be here waiting--still loving you, this you should already know....

HLB


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


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Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-06-28 09:56 PM


Wow Holly, I sure hope you let this person read this

Very heartfelt writing

All my love,
Jeffrey


Holly
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2 posted 2000-06-28 10:48 PM


Jeffrey-
Thanks. No, I haven't shown him yet...but I think I will take your advice. Thanks!  
love & all,
-Holly


I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne


Jamie
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3 posted 2000-06-29 12:52 PM


Absence is like the wind,, it can extinguish or create an inferno..
Lovely musings.
jamie

MysticalNights
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4 posted 2000-06-30 04:24 PM


Wonderful, heartfelt piece here Holly.. Lovely..

A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes...

Honeybee
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5 posted 2000-06-30 05:24 PM



A lovely piece from the heart.  I relate very much to this. Take Jeffery's advice, do show to the person that you wrote it for, only then will he know of your true love for him  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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