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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Meditation In the deep of listening I sway a seaweed dance where breathing is sweet intoxication and my hair like dark rain, rains up, orange fish with marble eyes enclose themselves there in green twilight daydream flowing past precision’s dart, this grace is slithering silent soft and there is no voice but a flutter sings like winged bird captured above a flower stilled yet vibrant in delight of nectar waiting - waiting this verdant display to capture bliss. The sound moves through the grass drinking dew it floats across blade and fulfills its silent velvet grace in a sigh that feathers across the swamp and through the briar's blistered path that time made to a wealth of purple lupine then waiting there in divine seclusion a dance a dance a dance that drenches every pore with feeling and peace so sultry so inclusive I’m lost for the open that I’ve melted. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm right there with you, Martie! This is absolutely wonderful!  Denise |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A quiet poem..meant to be read in a whisper! Truly wonderful.  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ 'I sway a seaweed dance' This alone is worth the read then you add ... 'flutter sings like winged bird captured above the flower' and then you take me further into serenity with ... 'fulfills its silent velvet grace in a sigh that feathers across the swamp' I am 'melted' .... Thank you for this beautiful gift, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise--oh, I'm so glad you joined me! PdV--whispering here... Marge--thank you for the beauty of reply! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It continues to amaze me how you can come up with such wonderful phrases and weave them into your poetry....wonderful work again, madam.. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
"and peace so sultry so inclusive" this is so perfect, really love this marite |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You continute to amaze me, deer, with your always sweet replies! Corazon---thank you, I'm so glad that you enjoyed my poem. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hi ya Martie, Nice to see your getting into a little meditation. We just got back from camping and I want to meditating or the underside of my eyelids. I should tell I like your stuff a little more than I do. Sending prayers Forever Dale |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is just beautiful Martie ... if flows so softly and sweety, almost tickling my mind, absolutely stunning words! Best wishes, /Kit |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice poem, I liked it and after reading PDV's reply, I tryed reading it again in a wisper and enjoyed reading it even more, a very intelligent poem . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Oh yes... I'm dancing now...  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Dale, I've missed you--I expect some wonderful camping poems from you and RG, you hear! Kit--you say such nice things in your replies...thank you so much. Tom--thank you for the intelligent--makes me feel...ah, intelligent..I like that! Nan--I'm so glad my words made you dance--quite a feat or feet (no pun intended) |
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